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(一)首段:说明写信目的
1、回信建议
I am delighted to hear from you. In your email, you asked for advice on how to ____. I am more than willing to provide you with some suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信。在邮件中,你询问了关于如何____的建议。我非常乐意为你提供一些建议。
I am delighted to receive your email, in which you sought advice on how to _. Here are my suggestions. 我很高兴收到你的邮件,你在信中寻求关于如何_的建议。以下是我的一些建议。
2、直接建议
1)向下/平级:
①表明身份,说明背景
As [身份], I’d like to / I am writing to / I’m delighted to hear that +[题干背景信息]
例:As a representative of the Students’ Union, I am writing to extend a warm welcome to you.
作为学生会的代表,我写信向你们致以热烈的欢迎。
②说明目的,提出建议
向下/平级:To help you [目的], I am pleased to offer several suggestions.
为了帮助你[做什么],我很高兴为你提供一些建议。
2)向上建议
①表明身份,先夸夸
向上:As[身份], I truly appreciate the favorable[优点]you provide for us.
例:As a senior student, I truly appreciate the favorable environment you provide for us.
作为一名大四学生,我非常感激您为我们提供的良好学习环境。
②说明目的,提出建议
向上:However, there is still room for improvement in terms of[问题], and I have a few suggestions.
然而,在某个[问题]方面还有改善空间,我有一些建议。
(二)中间段:说明具体建议
(二)中间段:说明具体建议-How 1、给个人建议(外国学生) ①① 建议1:心理准备First and foremost, you should get mentally prepared for[the new journey],so you won’t feel overwhelmed by unexpected challenges.
首先,你应该为[新的旅程]做好心理准备,这样就不会因意外的挑战感到不知所措。
②建议2:分析利弊,自我认知
To begin with, I hope you can weigh the pros and cons of each[选择]and assess your own strengths and interests objectively.
首先,我希望你可以权衡每个[选择]的利弊,并客观评估自己优势和兴趣。
③建议3:善用网络资源
In addition, it is essential to make full use of the rich learning resources on the Internet to deepen your understanding of[信息]and sharpen your[相关]skills.
此外,要充分利用互联网上丰富的学习资源,深入了解[信息],并提升你的[相关]技能。
④建议4:设定目标
Moreover, another important step is to set clear and achievable goals, which will guide your progress and keep you motivated.
此外,另一个重要的步骤是设定清晰且可实现的目标,这将指引你的进步,并保持你的动力。
⑤建议5:乐观态度
Last but not least, make sure to stay optimistic throughout the process, as a positive attitude can keep you moving forward.
最后但同样重要的是,一定要在整个过程中保持乐观,因为积极的态度会不断推动你前进。
2、给机构建议(宏观系统)
①建议1:升级系统,优化资源配置
First and foremost, there is an urgent need to upgrade the outdated facilities, which goes a long way towards encouraging [人] to engage in [事情].
首先,迫切需要升级陈旧的设施,这对于鼓励[人]参与[事情]将起到极大的推动作用。
②建议 2:加强宣传,提高个人意识
In addition, it is imperative to help[人]realize the value of[XX]and foster an awareness of[XX]through a series of informative lectures/reports.
此外,通过一系列信息丰富的讲座/报告,帮助[人]认识到[XX]的价值,并提高对[XX]的意识是至关重要的。
③建议3:数字化转型
Moreover, I would like to suggest that an online[XX]system be set up, which allows [人]to do[事情], significantly improving their overall experience and engagement.
此外,我建议建立一个在线[XX]系统,这将使[人]能够做[事情],从而显著提升他们的整体体验和参与度。
④建议4:制定惩罚/奖励规则
Furthermore, it is advisable to introduce a [punishment/ reward ] system to incentivize [人] to actively participate in [事情], ensuring better compliance and fostering positive behavior.
此外,建议引入一个[惩罚/奖励]机制,以激励[人]积极参与[事情],从而确保更好的执行效果并促进积极行为。
⑤建议5:提供个性化支持
Lastly, I recommend offering personalized support to cater to the diverse needs of [人], which will help them better navigate [具体情境或问题] and achieve their goals.
最后,我建议提供个性化支持,以满足[人]的多样化需求,这将帮助他们更好地应对[具体情境或问题],并实现他们的目标。
(三)结尾段:总结收尾
1、向下/平级
I sincerely hope that my suggestions prove beneficial to you. If you need any further information or assistance, please do not hesitate to contact me.
我真诚希望我的建议对你有所帮助。如果你需要进一步的信息或协助,请不要犹豫与我联系。
I hope my suggestions will be of benefit and wish you [美好祝愿]. Feel free to reach out if you need any further information or assistance.
我希望我的建议对你有所帮助,并祝你[美好祝愿]。如果你需要更多信息或帮助,请随时联系我。
2、向上
感谢您在百忙之中抽出时间阅读这封信。如果您能认真考虑这些建议,我将不胜感激。
2012年小作文
Directions: Some international students are coming to your university. Write them an email in the name of the Students’ Union to
- extend your welcome and
- provide some suggestions for their campus life here.
模板范文(135词)
Dear international students,
Para1: ①As a representative of the Students’ Union, I am writing to extend a warm welcome to you. ②To help you settle into campus life smoothly, I am pleased to offer some suggestions that I hope will enhance your experience here.
Para2: ①First and foremost, you should get mentally prepared for the new environment, so you won’t feel overwhelmed by unexpected challenges. ②Additionally, it is essential to make full use of the rich learning resources at this university to sharpen both your language and academic skills. ③Lastly, be sure to set clear and achievable goals, which will guide your progress and keep you motivated throughout your studies here.
Para3: ①I hope my suggestions will be of benefit and wish you a fulfilling and enriching campus life here. ②Feel free to reach out if you need any further information or assistance.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
范文翻译:
亲爱的国际留学生们:
第一段:①作为学生会的代表,我写信向你致以热烈的欢迎。②为了帮助你顺利适应校园生活,我很高兴为你提供一些建议,希望这些建议能提升你的校园体验。
第二段:①首先,你应该为全新的环境做好心理准备,这样你就不会因遇到意料之外的挑战而感到不知所措。②其次,充分利用学校丰富的学习资源,提升你的语言和学术能力也是至关重要的。③最后,务必设定明确且可实现的目标,这将引导你的进步,并在整个学习过程中保持你的动力。
第三段:①我希望我的建议对你有所帮助,并祝你在这里拥有充实且丰富的校园生活。
②如果你需要进一步的信息或帮助,欢迎随时联系我。
诚挚的,
Li Ming
诚挚的,
李明
Li Ming